Ruby skin,
Crunch!
teeth engulfs
marrow, flesh
taking nutrients
within lips
making them
ruby red.
A contest entry
- just to prompt you... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended June 8, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
first impression?
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Diet beverly soda
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haha
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very imagnitive. i really like it
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aww thanks ^-^
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creatively engaging... x
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Thank you, I'm pleased you liked it.
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unique very, very unique.
simple, but powerfully beautiful. =] -
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THANK YOU! ^_^
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fine depiction
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Thanks! ^_^
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thats cute....ish. lol. kinda weird but cool
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thanks, not really, we tend to have normal coloring when we eat healthier, that's what I was kind of getting at. ^^;; lol
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i didnt no that...
lol maybe i shood stat eating healthier and my skin mite not b as wite
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maybe if you eat more meat...protein. o.o
but sometimes skin coloring is just...well skin coloring...we can't change our natural pigment, but we can make ourselves healthier to get a better glow.
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