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Strum me Something Sweet

Lipstick promises seal a good bye
Your touch may drive me insane
This is desire not love, I know you lie
You don't love me, my sweet cocaine

Why did this happen, How come it has to be this way?
"I can't do this" ,it rings in my head often 
we didn't have it yesterday and it's not what we have today
nor any other , but when you strum my heart softens

You pick up your guitar, blond hair, sweet eyes and strum
You pick ever so softly, and let the words leak out
Play every note, sweet as cherries, beat of the drum
You, your it. You, your what it's all about

When I hear your sweet melodies, I want to stay
when I hear the music, my heart sings
I don't want to go, but my heart strays away
Pulled in by the guitars strings

Betraying it all, leaving you behind just play one more time
pick, strum, sweet love please make something new
please, I know you don't love me and maybe this is a crime
but with in heart, I know it's the music i love I've outgrown you

Author notes

http://me-inside515.deviantart.com/art/s-o-u-n-d-o-f-c-h-e-r-r-y-124696847

picture of inspiration, out of all thirty pictures to chose from, i have to say this one inspired me the most.

and it really has to inspire to make me rhyme, i don't like rhyme.

fall in love with music

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  • Kathraina silver member
    June 22

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    Oooh nicely done with this piece! I love the consistent rhyme here, and great imagery throughout this write. Bravo


    ♥ Kate