All these tears roll down my face
In my heart you won't erase
Why couldn't I see
were just not meant to be
There's so much anger and pain
It seems there is no stop to the rain
upon my heart
that you just tore apart
I love you so much
and the warmth of your touch
Why do you act this way
Why can't you we just be okay
I want you to know from my heart
you're whats tearing us apart
thinking about you makes me cry
so for now this is goodbye
What did you think
Comments
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Aww luv it itz heart breaking,
but shows the pain you were feeling.
I feel thiz way still for someone
i luv but had to let go.
Thats what makes this poem so good
cuz itz real and people easily can relate.
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I am grateful you shared this with us all... it allows us to feel your pain with you. I thank you.
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I can relate to this... and sadly enough, the guy treated me like crap and still does... along with his son. but anywho, you did a very good job writing this piece. You kept my attention the whole time. You did amazing! Keep it up!
TwiztidMaggot -
Buddybear123
I love this poem because it shows ur strong feelings to the audiance and it shows that ur hurting and I love how u made it all rhyme, I just love poems that rhyme, but don't worry the poems don't have to rhyme in order for them to be a poem. ur a great poet and u shouldn't stop no matter wat the other people say about ur poems and say that its not good because their just jealous about ur talent to write poems. I'll be rooting for you keep up the good work. luv ya as a friend.
from ur friend Christopher Foote
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