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These Thoughts

Glancing in the mirror
bloodshot eyes,
seeing the tears
roll on down

Sitting in a corner
looking down,
upon the slits
of trickling blood

Feeling of living
gone away,
yet these feelings
here to stay

Thinking of dying
seems good,
but still living
to see tomorrow.

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  • RazorBladesRomance
    July 1

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    I relate sucks when sucide doesn't go your way.
    and having to live tomorrow after is depressing.

  • thepoetx69
    June 23

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    this one makes me think of many days in which I was in these same shoes. I longed for many days to never appear, or many days to disappear...


  • TwiztidMaggot
    June 9

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    Wow. that's the first thing that came to my mind reading this. I can relate to the poem. You did an amazing job keeping my attention. Keep up your great work.

    TwiztidMaggot


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    June 9

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Thank you for sharing your poem with us. It really is a sad piece. If you need any help learning the site please feel free to IM me.
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