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Transfiguration

Missing image
Crystaline prisms,
project infinite spectrums
of intoxicating color.
Exquisite hues
emanate brilliant patterns
of intense light,
upon the canvas of this moment.
Compelled by a desire
to lose myself
within its radiant magnificence.

Each facet multiplied,
within an incredible mirror of eternity.
Drifting aimlessly through a
kaleidoscope of times without end.
A beauty that bathes me
in transparent clarity,
too fragile for the human eye.

Creating transfigurations
within a breathless moment of enchantment,
Of which I can barely contain,

I am
enlightened….


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  • ah yes, i remember reading this the other day, with the kaleidoscope, all the colours smiling in memory.


  • queenie
    June 11

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    so wonderfully colorful,you used the perfect thoughts to make the image come to life. i really ejoyed this. my best to you in the con test.


  • awannabepoet
    June 10

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    This poem for the annointed few that would breath in the essence of what it is you are saying.

    "Compelled by a desire
    to lose myself
    within its radiant magnificence."

    I feel the need to reinvent oneself spoken in these words, for what is life if not a endless string of moments highlighted in some brilliant refelction of mood, color and light.

    I like it, I like it so!

  • i had a kaleidoscope when i was a kid, it was brilliant, a good piece, full of movement and colour and light lifting the spirit to peace.


  • Jayde1
    June 8

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    awsome

    what a beautifully written poem....tis a fantastic piece.....enjoyed it from start to finish....
    well done


  • Gabreil silver member
    June 8
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    brilliant peice brilliant pick very classy art

  • I have seen the beauty of light through prisms. One can easily get lost in this wonderful display of light. It draaws you in likr a fire in the fire place on a cold winter night--another light display.

  • Wow...
    intellectual
    excellent imagery
    leaving the reader enthralled
    Well done poetess
    Thanks for the share
    Darky

  • Wow. This blew me away! The poem its self is gorgeous, but added with the picture and background, it all adds to a wonderful read.
    Absolutely Beautiful

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