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The Big Bang a Love story

From the creation of the universe
with one big bang we started on our way
as mere specks of dust traveling through space
destined to find each other again one day

We journeyed for what was truly forever
in a vacuum so cold, dark and all alone
then so long ago we settled on a planet
this strange new place would become our home

As time went by we became the life
that on this planet was nurtured by the sun
but ever wandering all through time searching
for the other half, desiring the other one

We have passed so close to each other
truly a billion times, almost side by side
but not until this special moment
did the universe allow us to once again collide

Some lovers find fireworks, the earth moves,
or music as they kiss, compared to us that is not much
our fireworks go back to our beginning as we feel
the big bang explosion again, each times our lips touch


We have been destined to find each other
since the beginning of time
Now that we are together
Forever I am yours, and you will always be mine.

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  • Roseamongweeds
    October 15
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    Wow. This.. incapacitated me.


  • rainbows. gold member
    July 8

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    As time went by we became the life
    that on this planet was nurtured by the sun
    but ever wandering all through time searching
    for the other half, desiring the other one

    I really like this. Thank-you very much for entering this piece into my contest.


  • Antebellum
    July 5
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    Thanks so much for entering.

    [if you end up in the finals I will comment better]

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 3

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    AWESOME!! I really enjoyed reading this! it was just..WOW! such great emotion. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • nobodys-girl
    July 2

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    This is so romantic and just so full of love! i love it! thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • DistilledGin
    June 19
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    OMG

    This was everything I was wanting this contest to produce and more! Great job!


  • Jade Rain
    June 11

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    A very sweet poem! It's good to see an adoring poem sparkle out of the gloom.

    "our fireworks go back to our beginning as we feel
    the big bang explosion again, each times our lips touch"

    Thank you very much for sharing!


  • techno-tard
    June 9
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    Beautifully expressed, I love the concept and the delivery!

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