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Near The End

Near the end
They threaten me
With other men.

Long after I have
Lost all interest
In what they do.

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  • JinSays gold member
    June 21

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    wheewwwwwwww. . . . there it flew, right over my head.
    You got some splaining to do, to get me to understand this one. . .lol
    sigh. . .I'm just not all that bright today, I guess
    lol
    Love,
    jin


  • Emmyb gold member
    June 20
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    simple and effective.


  • Snowbear gold member
    June 13

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    Just a few words, and yet you manage to describe the end of a relationship perfectly. I know exactly what you are talking about, albeit from the other side - when I could see it in his eyes that he really didn't care, lol. Excellent poem!

  • Judith Chandler
    June 7
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    So succinct!