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Perception

Perception

Perfection is but a thing of the past
theres no truth to the word
yet no right or wrong meaning
it is perception that leads to perfection

Invisioning perfection i think of you
the girl in my dreams whose face is a blur
a girl of traits unmatched by all others
the girl in my dreams whom im waiting for

Clumsy yet elegant as you whisp by
with the smile of a saint and the will to conive
eyes dark and deep that brighten a room
with humor of child and wisdom full bloomed

Your beautys refreshing and attitude harsh
conversations are filling not light nor sour
a kiss legendary to few who have heard
unquestionable love to whom your heart holds

You may say im tripping but i say im falling
falling deeply in love with you
a figure who's still unknown to me
but not unknown to gravity, so fall into my life
...and then in love with me

Author notes

Though you may not have met that special someone you always have that vision of what they might be like, and this is my vision of that special person.

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  • cyberwaif
    July 8
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    very nice,and what a lovely vision to have! well done


  • xxshootingstarsxx
    June 29

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    ^^ pretty

    It makes me feel like I'm in a dream or something like that. It's like a weightless feel. I was kind of confused with the perception thing. Just what it had to do with the girl but oh well. I liked it! Keep writing.


  • Mango Memories gold member
    June 29

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    awww... what a sweet write, really wonderfully written and very honest! i loved reading it.

    Well done on a great write and for the feature!


  • glenn shannon silver member
    June 28

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    SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL how we paint the picture in our mind of one who we rally dont know .. delightfull read and very well penned thank you congats on spotiee too


  • Fallen-Thumper gold member
    June 28

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    You may say im tripping but i say im falling
    falling deeply in love with you
    a figure who's still unknown to me
    but not unknown to gravity, so fall into my life
    ...and then in love with me <-- i really loved this.
    this is a brilliant poem and i loved every word. Amazing!! A great poem


  • green mother rose
    June 25

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    awwwwwwwwwww i love thisssssssssss... great write.. keep up the awesome writing..

    be back soon to read more..

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