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You Aren't Me

I like your hair today,
        Thank you...
"Hay, fancy a drink, what do you say?"
        No, not really...
I like your shoes today,
        Thank you...
I'll carry your bag, if i may.
        What can I do, to make you go away

I want to be unique,
Not a following sheep.

I want to be the only me,
What is there you cannot see.

You are you,
And I am me,
I dont want to be you,
What is so special about me???



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  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    June 8
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    This is an excellent write Best of luck to you in this contest


  • cazzy71
    June 7

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    AWESOME WRITE

    Thankyou for your entry,its more light hearted than several others,but equally worthy of being given enormous credit.Its exact,to the point and works so fantastically well.