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The Ties of Time

The sun slowly fades beyond the horizon,
marking the end of another day,
and the beginning of a new one.
A new day,
filled with the same thoughts.
I wish these days would pass faster...
But they won't.
Time drags on,
slowly,
ever so slowly.
An endless obstacle.

Reality takes its place,
age stands in the way.
What I want,
Is forbidden,
forbidden by time.
If I were older...
Oh how I wish I were,
Then maybe it could be...
But I'm not,
and time cannot change.

Therefore, I'm stuck.
Trapped in my thoughts and dreams.
Thoughts of him,
thoughts of what it could be.
Only to imagine,
never to truly know.

So I wait,
letting time take it's path.
Hoping,
only hoping,
it leads me to find him.
To find a chance,
a chance to know what it could be.

What it would be...
if only we weren't
so seperated
by the ties of time
and the shackles of age.


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  • Little Lesley
    August 13

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    Brilliant work. Absolutly excellent. I can't really describe it. Speechless, you call it. Only thing I must say is...AWESOME!
    Well, wish you luck!
    ♥~Little Lesley~♥

  • Brilliant

    Hey, I know you're still POed at Lizzy but Summer Moonstone needn't be mad at Annie Shadows, just let Liz and Brit be arguing, not Annie and Summer(it makes sense to me).
    Well that's only what I think, you can still ignore both of us completely.
    anyway, this is an amazing write, you've really improved your writing skills. I didn't realize how well you write now.

    ~Annie Shadows