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Cold Blooded

I'd sooner chance a snake bite than take risks upon your lips.
I'd even love the snake before I'd strike it.
I'd sooner kiss a toad than taste the poison of your mouth.
And further more I think that I would like it.

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  • sinfull
    August 22
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    Sharp and to the point

    Well-written with a good inner and end rhyme that stands out. Well done!


  • Kiran silver member
    June 10
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    Love this piece. Brilliantly written

  • Purrsanthema
    June 8
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    I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Sokarjo
    June 7

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    Hehehe!! OH I adore this!!! You're brilliant!! The flow and rythm, but especially the perfect thoughts in it. Delightful. You're fantastic!