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Daddys Little Girl

There is nothing to fear,
Because daddy is here,
I will be beside you,
In everything you do.

I will hold you while you cry,
You'll never hear me say goodbye,
Because you are my diamond, my pearl,
You're daddy's little girl.

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  • ahhh...such sweet sentiments for a baby girl!! I remember when mine was little (13 now!). Every stage in the development of their lives is awesome...we are continuously getting an upgrade as they age.
    thank you for sharing. peace and light, kp