Its wrong; what your doing to me
You shouldn't be allowed to do this
But what can i say?
How can i make you see i exsist?
You make me feel mad
Though im sure your glad to see
It makes me feel sad
To see how you feel about me!
Why does this happen to me?
Why do i feel like this?
But what can i say?
How can i make you see i exsist?
Author notes
this is my bad attempt at rhyming.
This isnt really about anyone it just came to me so i decided to write it and i tried my best to rhyme. but i guess im just not that good and it!
A contest entry
- anything-it doesnt matter what! by Gods only child.
410 points, ended July 2, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewritten Quickie by Blue-Rose Beauty.
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Please point out ways i can improve this. thanks
Comments
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Let's hope whoever has stolen your heart, gives his heart to you as well.
I really think it's good and thanks for sharing such an amazing poem and I'm sure everyone here agrees.
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This was a really good poem evne though you just did it to write it, it sounds like u had ispiration..
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this was a really good poem!
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awwww love it again!!
u liiikeee some one &&& i wont leave u in peace.... every time i go on Ap im gona bugg u coz u liiikeeeee some one........lols ino im anoyyiingggg im even starting to irritate myself so i will go!!
lols ly
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jus wanted 2 comment again coz i love yur poems...!
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ye suuuureee its not about anyone .... it good 10/10
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