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reflection

We are only mere reflections,
Of crown of creatures,the man of action
We are mere dolls and puppet
Do nothing and idle sit
We try to speak words but comes out growl,
If we are humans,why we howl
As we are beasts in disguise,
We superficially talk to look wise
But in our Angel like talk
Devil laughs and screech like hawk,
We are totally different from what we try to be
Our untrue expressions we make people to see
we ,are now,Opposite ones,THe reflections
Who are  evil and do only evil actions

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what do you think are we really mere reflections or man of action?

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  • The last three lines look like they have some typing errors in. 'expressionbs', for example, and some unnecessary commas in the penultimate line.

    Nice poem. Thanks for entering.