envy strikes blindly
with malice-bound shortcomings
reward positives
Author notes
You have the tools, use them for your self assurance.
A contest entry
- Jealousy has a capital J by cazzy71.
415 points, ended June 20, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does degraded self respect reek havoc forever?
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we all know that green eyed monster always whispering behind our backs
yet we take the hardest efforts to conceal its presence from ourselves and the people we care about
i like this peace
the message of this poem is clearly outlined
dosn't need elaboration
well done fellow poet
keep penning, keep dreaming
Zarokk666
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green monster
Great take on contest. In your brief verse you have nailed the green monster, jealousy, a dangerous and destructive creature. Like the language and the resolution phrase.
churchill
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provocative
Valuable message. Like the sharp clarity. Excellent title that has tremendous appeal. Artful writing and meaningful author notes.
matisse
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good message
Like content flow and structure. Extremely valid message very well composed.
solitaire
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I appreciate your comments and insights very much!
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serious
An important question. Like the title and proposition. Has understanding and poetic strength. Beautiful background really compliments the content.
trouble
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cazzy71 is trying to solve a problem, hope it helps!
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thankyou for your entry
Brief,nine words set the emotions easily,effectively and effortlessly. Thankyou for entering. -
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