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Snake In The Grass...

Take the pictures from my mind and make them yours
cant open my mouth or the picture of my life i will have to change
see i dont want to be like anyone else i dont want to be plain dont want to be just another the same.

Cant you find an idea of your own or do you have to be a clone
you even try to look like me your sense of self is so meek
your soul is weak.

I would be flattered if you where nice but your devious and your heart is cold as ice
you are the ice queen. Any queen you would be happy whether others are sad or suffer you do not care as long as you get what you command everyday as long as you get your own selfish way.

This is becoming crazy i look at you and think why do you try to be me you have no idividuality,
It is a wicked and poisonous jealousy
you tried to ruin me you tried to take the things that made me happy,
hes possessed you would say he never leaves you alone but your the one trying to be my clone.

Not long after you get your wicked way you ask him out the very next day, then you say "please dont be mad at me".
by this point i should be really mad but i dont have it in me i should just walk away but i turn and say "ok"........
The only reason you told me is because he wasnt even interested in you thats what you get when you mess with others lifes thats Gods way of telling you "its not meant to be".
You tried to make a fool of me make me feel less than you even the man upstairs thought you where wrong he turned your plan around and slapped you in the face wake up girl you are a fucking disgrace.

You are a very sad soul cruel you find pleasure in others loss and misery noone will be happy until you are happy.
You have to be the best look the best or your not happy
Your are the bitch in a teen movie minus the popularity because lets face it you are ugly not just outside more so inside.

Where is your sense of self where is your pride?.
You may have slept with him after me or even when he was with me i wouldnt be surprised tell me did he look in your eyes?.
You let yourself be used cant you see you cant make him love you with your body.
You are a piece of piss a joke to me.
You sleep with other peoples boyfriends to so i dont take that personally your just a cheep thrill to a man that is not worthy to have a good girl like her or me.

Keep twisting in your dark mind it must be lonely carry on making others lifes a misery but you can only do that for so long i am free fucked you off out of my life and i am happy this is purely poetry and when im finished this one page ive cleared all anger left away.


I was young to blind to see that being your best friend was ruining me.

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  • Just a few spelling errors in the beginning, but still a great poem.

  • Very wel writen poem indeed


  • cazzy71
    June 7

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    thankyou for your entry

    Wonderful write,amazing, leave it alone,it works superbly. Grarteful thanks. Just one correction,sense is sense,not sence,but otherwise I would recommend you leave it alone.its a superb piece of excellant artwork.