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February

Return with me to February,
Cold and frozen night
The week of lovers and roses,

There she stands
Inhaling cancer and swaying
Unaware

And he approaches
Familiar and still a stranger
Hunting

Interlude

Four months;
It falls apart around her,
And love is dead,
Love never existed in this world
Roses are poison
And his lips speak pain
She’s faltering and collapsing
Destructing

Return with me to February
In the cold and frozen night,
Please, can we start again?

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  • Very Sad write... You captured the emotion beautifully...