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The Drummer Begins To Drum

If this bus spun and smashed or plunged and burst into flames, strangers would be flung together. Random people – interlaced to congregate, crisscrossing from busy lives to meet at this one, central point – would either die or survive together. Suddenly, we’d each be real, meaningful, three-dimensional to one another. We’d be people, not just strangers taking up a seat.

Once your stop arrives, you disappear forever.

I really do like being a public passenger. It’s such a gentle, deliberate way of being a watcher; I gaze out the window

[and sometimes I remember you doing the same. Your face was reflected in the milky glass, and you had to know I was staring]

                                                      and ponder passing life.

I sit on the bus and think about you and rain and personification. I think about words and songs and people’s clothes, and the ghosts in the fogged-up windows and the ghosts in the seats from bygone trips. I watch the gap at the bottom of the door, and shiver at the road whipping by.
I sit on the bus and think how nice it is to not be interrupted.

I’m no one to anyone here.

Someday I might just catch a bus to nowhere, and end up wherever I end up. Catch a bus to leave, and catch a bus to return.
Set out nowhere
and come back home.
















Author notes

title is from Coldplay, 'Til Kingdom Come'
this... kinda follows on from an earlier piece of mine.

constructive criticism very welcome

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