Lost

I am lost in a world of darkness
Giving into lifes problems
Holding onto hope but losing my grasp
I want so much to be free
Can someone please find me
Keeping emotions bottled up
I know I look ugly
but you don't know the girl inside
Starving myself to make you like me
why the fuck am I like this
Can't be who I am
Gotta be someone else
I want to leave this world
but what is life without love...

it's my life
and this is me

Author notes

it may not be good or be a poem as such but it was a quick write

What did you think

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By me, right now

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Miss Faerie
June 8
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is really sad, it shows that you are miserable and your emotion is raw

I would suggest using punctuation

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Good job, keep writing.
Ali - Pie
June 7

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♥ !!!
i think you written your feelings and emotions quite well! i can relate to the hurt you feel, it's not always easy to feel secure with everything.
take care!