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Stale tears Scent


Let I be your Keeper

blessing and curse

Let I be your redemption

dim and pale future  

 

Stale tears scent

draws me near

The sinews of your neck-iron

The chains of your heart-rust

 

Give me the words

I long to hear;

Never never will I trust

Never never will I love

 

Set me Loose

Draw me Near

 

Let I be your keeper

blessing and curse

Let I be your redemption

dim and pale future.

 

Forgiveness is for fools

Everyone knows Pride Rules.

It is I who supplies

sweet nightmares demise

Cut, Bleed, Purge

 

Give Me The Words

I hunger to hear;

Never Never Will I trust

Never Never Will I love.

 

Set me Loose

Draw me Near

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: I don't move on....

thus you can become easy prey ...be careful...don't say I didn't warn ya.


picture credit: vampirela76@glittergraphics.com

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  • zoev
    July 7
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    really good and unqiue!


  • Dead Hair
    July 7

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    Wow. A very unexpected entry, and I adore the unexpected. You've crafted this eerie and well!
    "It is I who supplies
    sweet nightmares demise
    Cut, Bleed, Purge"
    A strong write, thank you for sharing


  • SheWasPreternatural
    June 12

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    Brilliant ears

    no compliment or praise i grace you with will do this piece any justice.

    "Stale tears scent
    draws me near
    The sinews of your neck-iron
    The chains of your heart-rust

    Give me the words
    I long to hear;
    Never never will I trust
    Never never will I love"

    ..... those lines stand out to me the most. true brilliance..... well done ears! -T


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    June 10

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    Never Never
    Ever Ever
    Kind of Stroking
    Liked this one alot
    keep sharing

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Ez Writer silver member
    June 7

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    Quite a captivating and fascinating poem !
    Deliciously & brilliantly expressed throughout !
    Great rhyme & flow also ; way - to - go !!
    Best wishes & hugs !! Friend Easy


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    June 6
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    such a sweet poetess....i'd hate to see her dive into
    the darkness and lose all the joy I hear in her laughter
    and future.
    ears


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 6

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    You do that odd I thing on purpose? "Let I be.."

    That picture is creepy. heh

    I enjoyed reading this from you.



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