i recall solitude an anniversary of lost pupils;
& in fragments of ambiguous hues of gray, i heard your sweet, peaceful melody;
sharply interrupted by genuine versatility.
V, what's that sound?
What's that sound, V?
it blended perfectly with scotch miracles & peppermint wrappers,
soothing purple silk & marinated white.
I was drought from epidemic sauces,
& i witness bleached eyes.
Colorful, others might say, the trips have been settled to collapse.
Wrought, hardly enough; it carved paranoid sequences.
red; spread gently through our silhouette.
black; covered severely damped ground.
twisted, i recall, t'was twisted as a lemon drop spilled on Cerulean irises
when it kissed Vicodin eyelashes bursting in flames.
you knew, all too well, when the river flowed its hardest,
when the night covered the dusk;
when the air unfulfilled your agape lungs.
you knew.
it concentrated on genuine versatility,
leaving phantom recitals, unreceptive.
then it broke,
the silver linen broke him down.
wounded voices replied, gently tearing down barriers of disbelief.
{ it's just the wind,Six,
it's just the wind}
blankness blew open in surprise of empty hands;
she was there. she knew.
he was there. terra incognita.
then,
he was gone.
There is no cure V,
there is no cure.
[...]
{ for the broken-hearted & unnamed}
Author notes
Hemophilia - blood-clotting disorder: a disorder linked to a recessive gene on the X-chromosome and occurring almost exclusively in men and boys, in which the blood clots much more slowly than normally, resulting in extensive bleeding from even minor injuries.
now I know some people have this sickness, but this is just a metaphor brought and inspired by Ultraviolet.
Enjoy!
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That was crazy dope. I'm very self-centered and narcissistic and rarely find contemporary poets I enjoy because of it.
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zomfg u are such a talented writter whicth so many good ideas and i love all your poems
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lol thanks hunni im flattered that you like em... thanks!
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y wouldnt i they are great
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you are verrrry good with your imagery
as always you penned depth here.
OUTSTANDING!!
Blessings
Rend
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your right i do love it more,
its amazing,
such a great vocab, and view,
i relate to it so much,
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wow great write and powerful. I loved your line breaks and you can really write. I thought that you did really well.Can you give me feedback on my poem Downpour. If you want thanks.
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wow i like it, its very relatable,
very unique,
well done,
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tanks but its not done yet. it needs to be polished. this is just the beggining. but stay tune for the final entry
i know you'll like it even more.
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