Remember the feeling,
of lights on your face.
Remember the feeling,
of poise and grace.
So different from at home.
Remember the feeling,
of flying in place.
Remember the feeling,
of time and space.
That is not your own.
Remember the girls lined up,
from left to right.
Remember walking out of the studio,
out into the night.
But most of all, remember the girls who are becoming teachers.
Just. Like. You.
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Penguins
A contest entry
- PREWRITES!!!!!!! by PhoenixFaith.
550 points, ended June 12, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem is very cute and soft. I like the imagery used to describe a dancer. It sounds lovely. I'm rather uncoordinated myself, otherwise I would love to dance and experience this.
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Good imagery and repetition you have here. I like the structure of this piece as well. Good job
Best of luck and thanks for entering.
Kate -
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A beautiful piece that encourages the memory of what it feels like to dance, and how it can almost be flying.
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
Aww, this is absolutely gorgeous and I LOVED your rhyme scheme, it's not very common
Well done on a great start!
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