cupping my hands over the surface
with your crossed legs
and twisted body
you say 'sexy'
and continue to walk your cat
twisting a leaf into circular formation
combing down the strays
you say 'let's walk this way'
and we do
we walk your way
now
we're
out
where to now?
i've got no direction
and i'll follow you down
we can make trips
to the cemetery
talk about
some nonnegotiable feelings
we
are
capsizing
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I notice that I find it hard to comment on your work a lot of the time. Even though I want too, and it's not too good/bad thing it's because I get the sense that a lot of these are expressions to particular people. And I don't want to interrupt the moment.
That's a real testament to your writing though, that you create a moment that could be interrupted, on paper.
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you, sir are totally dead on.
but i like people to interrupt every moment.
thank you so much for such a fucking awesome comment.
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