When the Road Ends

I'm sittin' here at the end,
waiting for you to come.
I'm not leavin'
til I see you again.

Cars always pass
honkin' their horns.
Wondering why I'm just
sittin' in the grass.

Sometimes I get splashed,
by the cars coming by.
Though I'm always pondering,
if you just sped by.

You know where to find me,
I'll always be there.
When the road ends,
that's were I'll be.

The day you want me back,
just follow the road
til the end, when the
asphalt starts to crack.

If you start to get lonley

come find me.

I can promise you

that you'll always be free.

When the road ends,

I'll be waiting for you.

We will always

be the best of friends....

Author notes

1. A.When the road ends

This is sorta like a song I like, so i guess I kinda rewrote it, kinda
check it out

"The Man who can't be moved"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FW6F_g3upKA

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Tinselpool
June 7

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Not bad.
Here's a quote it reminds me of "Sometimes you just need to run away to see who will come after you". Your description was simple but moving; it was a little confusing though. Paragraphs 2, 3, and 5 are my favorites. But for a suggestion, I'd make a more powerful ending. The poem is mostly describing your thoughts; if that's what you want it to be like, that's fine with me, but if otherwise, you should really change it. Like...
What happens if the person you are waiting for comes back? Will you ever get up, get on with life, try to forget about it? Overall, it was an enjoyable poem and serene to read.
Jornada
June 7

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This is marvelous! I like it especially because I've always loved to travel, and thought about journeying on, with someone waiting for me.
SmartBrick
June 7
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That was AH-MAZING!!!
That was so awesome! I love it!
AbidoodleCullen
June 6
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Love itt.
Thanks for Entering and Gooooood Luck!
Abi