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[ i know i shouldn't cry ]

i know i shouldn't cry
and just get up
keep my head held high

wipe away the tears
dust off the dirt
cast off the fears

but my days full of rain
no more sunshine
nothing but pain

rainbows mean nothing
and the flowers
a meaningless something

days now pass by
same routine
no point to sigh

same tears falling on my shirt
same girl
no longer alert

silent at home no word spoken
at home
silence is a token

it stops the yelling
the fighting
it's so compelling

just cover my ears
close my eyes
and feel the tears

make myself hold my breath
my cries arent' heard
silent as death

crying at home's not accepted
i must be happy
all my feelings rejected

what i feel should be forgone
forget everything
and happiily move on

but...........is that right?

Author notes

i know this might kind of such ok really suck but i had to get my feelings out in the only way i know poetry

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  • Desence
    June 13
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    WOW

    U get it chica, I got an image when I read this... Keep ur head up sis...


  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 7

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    awww, wow.

    this is soo sad. i love some of the images here. so fascinating!!!

    it was simple, and you got your feelings across so well. sometimes, its best to forget about things and just move on, sometimes its best to turn around and fix it. but whatever it is, keep smiling!