Witness dawn, aching, with bruiséd eyes.
F ractured, A gonizing, T attered, H atred, E xcruciating, R epulsive...
Father.
Author notes
Thanks a lot, Daddy...
There's a Shakespearean-esque word, up there.
A.N.: T e a r s Y o u B l e e d
A contest entry
- Abuse and fear. by WednesdayJade.
1250 points, ended August 5, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be as vicious as you like with it...
Comments
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Well that really sums up a lot of what abuse is. Short but very strong, carries a lot of emotion. I like it. Thank you for entering.
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Well wrote. Sad and angring but that's life I guess.
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oh no, sorry...thanks for entering the contest
Linda
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has he done it rescently? I hope not. this is very sad, yet honest which is unbeatable.
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