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Soul

The darkness takes me
To places unknown
To a side of me
That I'd rather not see
The darkness takes me
I know my way well
All sights are the same
All cares thrown away
The Darkness takes me
I do not fight back
Cannot fight back
Cus the darkness is me.

I do not know what I am saying in this poem. Help me understand my own words.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • bowmore bill
    June 7

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    has potential

    Two posibillities, the first is that you are depressed.
    The second is that you are filled with aggression and ,mood swings.
    Ps, dont take this personally.

  • NikMorgan
    June 7

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    I think you like everyone else can be capable of good and evil
    We are all governed by self interest and sometimes do the wrong thing because it seems best for us