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Micah Jacob Deterville

Micah Jacob:  (Outgoing, compassionate, and a tad bit coy)

Friend of the person on the pedestal and the one that falls under that shadow

Learned from the mistakes that crushed his own foundation

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Who dreams of roaming the country like Jack Kerouac playing the country’s music

Famous for his musical exploration and the discovery of his own musical identity

Who fears that “having lost but once his pride, he may forever tarry”

Who would never sacrifice his integrity for others

Who needs compassion and pacience

Who feels that he is the only romantic left in an array of dry realists

Who wishes he could make the much of time and lead an unconventionally enjoyable American life

Resident of the world  in which I have become accustomed

Deterville

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