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Free At Last

I fall into graffiti
and the rhythm of the streets,
Watching the rain dance at my feet
and kiss my cheeks;

Seeing my new face reflected 

In shallow puddles of oil and water,

painting rainbows on the pavement 

Finally liberated from my paper chains

Free at last 



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