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Good Morning Lord*revised

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Good morning Lord!

How are you today?*

I know you're  beside me,*

just like any other day.*

Good morning Lord!

I  feel your presence near*,

 I'm sipping on my coffee-*

on my favorite comfty chair

Good morning Lord!

I just took out a book,

loaded with assorted recipes.

Hm'which one should I cook.*

Good morning Lord!

I'm doing a sermon search.

Be my guide while I surf the net.

Oh, right there, at my church!

Good morning Lord!

In my heart a fire's burnin'.

I 've enjoyed the message  

My faithful Pastor's sermon.

Good morning Lord!

It's time I challenge this day.

I loved your company

I'm glad things went swell today*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Iron Saint
    October 1

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    Loved It!

    Please take a look at "Sunrise Song" on my page we have a lot of similar themes in our stuff small wonder seeing as it comes from Him! God Bless! Love James!


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    September 3

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    This is beautifully done, we need to seek the Lord in all that we do, and I like how you said asking him how to help you find a recipe for what to cook, that part was wonderful as all is. thanks for writing and sharing this, was a true joy to read. and the repetition was great!

    Love and light
    lencio


  • Deaths Prayer
    September 1

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    great

    Good morning lord indeed. always their when you wake up and always there when you go to sleep. the lord is all around us everywhere. good going and god bless


  • Alex Fitzpatrick
    August 16

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    A Beautiful Tribute to God.

    This is a lovely poem to God. You write with such love and sincerity. It’s a great idea and it’s very well expressed, and it flows beautifully. I’ve noticed a couple of minor mistakes, the kind we all make, that you might want to fix.
    on my favorte comfty chair- should be- on my favorite comfy chair
    Pastors needs an apostrophe – Pastor’s
    Other than that it's magnificent.


  • im just human
    August 14
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    i love your poetry in all my heart
    keep going


  • Wolfdog silver member
    August 5

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    Superb

    'tis a very coool write, indeed, and I love the background which you chose. You expressed your thoughts quite well, and imagery; rythm, and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing.


  • grampabob1946 silver member
    July 8

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    Wonder Poem!

    I walk with Jesus every day too. I pity those who reject Jesus. I think they do this because they don't want to give up their vices. But what a lonely life to walk with out God. I pray that Jesus calls on them Love your poem. God is smiling at you.

  • PianoMan
    June 9

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    This is a very interesting poem. It has a few different parts that I never would have thought of like this before, but I really like it and I think you did excellent. It is so comforting to know that God is always with us and that no matter what happens in our lives, He will be there to help get us through. Great job!!!!

    I especially liked this part since it reminds us of God's constant watch over our lives and how He always listens to our prayers.

    Good morning Lord!
    Is that you, listening while I pray?
    I know you're here to help me,
    Just like any other day.

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