Everyday that goes by, I see the things you do
Everyday you try, and I continue to appreciate you.
Everytime your in distress, you always try your best
Always give your all and nothing less.
Each and everyday you try and express your love
Even after you've done more than enough.
At your worst moment, I still love you more than ever
You're at the top of my love lever:-)
You're the happiness within me, you give me my strength
I'd do anything for you and go through any lengths.
Good times and bad times, we're still walking tall
Anything thrown at us, we fight through it all.
I just want to thank you, with all of my heart
As your friend, as your son, for doing your part.
Stay strong daddy, I know you have it in you
And you know I'd gladly help you, when your feeling blue.
*You're the best in this world to me. You have done a fantastic job of getting this far with all the problems and situations throughout your life. No one is perfect, but I believe you've done next to a perfect job of raising me and all that you have done for me. I do definitely appreciate it all too. Don't ever think I don't! If I don't express it as much as I should, I'm so sorry. Because you deserve the best and deserve to know that you are doing a great job! You really are my happiness and more important than anything to me!
Love you,
-Timmy
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OMG! You're Poeticweaver's son! He's such a brilliant poet and a wonderful person. I don't know him in real life, but he has been such a wonderful friend here on AllPoetry. He has been there for me in my darkest hours. This was a beautiful and lovely tribute to him.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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oh wow i love your poetry its really caughts my eye so keep on righting and never give up :]this is my favorite part of the poem : Each and everyday you try and express your love
Even after you've done more than enough.
At your worst moment, I still love you more than ever
You're at the top of my love lever:-)
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Precious...
You're always my precious moment,
around when I often smile
If there's a soul heaven sent,
it's you without wings my child.
Gifts bestowed upon my blue heart,
with shades of cloudy grays in me
Though all that's said within my art,
without you it's not poetry.
I love you my son, thanks.
-Dad. xo xo xo
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excellent
Wow Tim this is one of the deepest poems of yours I've read yet. In the four years I've been reading your poems I don't think I've read something so filled with sincerity, deepness, and love. Is your father lucky or what? Keep on loving him, keep on appreciating him. Always hold and stand close by him. He deserves that.
Thanks for sharing.
Brian -
This made me cry, my sweet nephew
Your Dad is the best and deserves this wonderful praise . I am sure that he knows how much you love him but it is always great to hear it. You have done a wonderful job with this! So touching. He will love it and by the way, this line:
"You're at the top of my love lever:-) "
That is awesome!
Aunt Lynda
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