When anger and hate became to much to keep inside
I was pushed far beyond the limits of Evil
And into a world where revenge
Was worth going to Hell for
That night I walked with my chainsaw in hand
Sawing off heads and limbs
With a knife I tore out the hearts of those who tore out mine
With my hand I ripped out there tounges
So no longer would I have to listen to their words
I dragged bodys to a grinder
Laughing as I heard them scream
Taking children from parents
And parents from children
I bound thier wrist and ankles with rope
Leaving them to watch in horror
As the ones they love die a slow and gruesome death
Knowing that they soon too will fall victim to my hand
It was a night when vengence was mine
Where nightmares became reality
And the souls I claimed were dragged to Hell
To forever spend eternity with the one
Like that of who rules Hell itself
Author notes
might work on maybe a little more but not sure
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Comments
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That is way morbid and very scary. You know what else it is though? Very Awesomeness!
Megs.
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scary! but i liked it, i know how this feels!
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Wooowwwwiiee!! You totaly captured my sate of mind when I was younger, maybe the age youre at now. Back when I lived with my insain christian mother (think the movie Carrie... but her mother) I was pretty intense. And fucking angry. The line "I was pushed far beyond the limits of Evil" I can really relate to. Sometimes evil does feel like only goes so far. Even the F word feels like its not enough at times. "Evil" is just a fairy tale. But wrongness and anger and hate and indiffrence does exsist. But when you are raised in a christan house, you are led to believe it is the ebony of all shades of grey. anyway this poem is awesome thank you for sharing.
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