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Want you back

I lied when I said
I wasn’t going to follow you
This time
You always ending hurting me
But without you
I feel like an echo
Of whom I used to be

In the evening
When I can’t sleep
I keep realizing
That I need you
To color up my world
Make me shine
In all the colors of the rainbow

Author notes

Option 2 (maybe mixed with 6 too):
Word bank: follow, time, echo, sleep, rainbow

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  • MelissahhMidnite
    June 6

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    But without you
    I feel like an echo
    Of whom I used to be

    i love these lines i think they sum up the whole poem
    thanks for entering