A rusted old key
Rests forever in silence
The door still locked
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Author notes
Option #2
A contest entry
- HAIKU Me, Baby by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended September 2, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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Very profound write with so many possibilities in interpretation. Love it! Nicely done. Thanks so much for entering my haiku contest. It's a pleasure reading your fine work
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Very nice haiku. We have locked ourselves in!
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very intriguing!
leaves a lot for one's imagination after the last line is finished!
love the mystery here
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Lovely, absolutely
This is a lovely piece here...ABSOLUTELY lovely and it works perfectly...All the best!
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this is lovely. it could mean so many things and probably does to each individual person who reads this. it is so profound yet really broad for each person. great job and good luck in the contest!
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I like this a lot. It says a lot but remains short and simple. great job!
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Oh, I think this is very good, and full of meaning!
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I feel profound sorrow with this Haiku. The locked door seems to want to be left alone, to mend itself.
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I hope someone finds the key and the door is opened could that happen?
A short but sad heartfelt write, full of feelings ad emotion very nicely done.
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Though that would be nice, it's been years, I don't believe they key will ever be found and I believe I'm okay with that thank you for your nice comment
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a very nice write.
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i love this :]
short but powerful
great job -
love it , might have dropped the is,
the door still locked -
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oh thank you! i hadn't even thought of it that way, but I like it
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sometimes the more you pare it down, the tighter it becomes, play with it a bit,, this one is a winner!
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thank you
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this is lovely. it could mean so many things and probably does to each individual person who reads this. it is so profound yet really broad for each person. great job
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I looove this. Short & sweet.
- Rachel ♥
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