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I’ am Fin To Get My Writing Shit Together

I’ am Fin To Get My Writing Shit Together

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

　

As I drop my head,

and give blessing to the words.

I drop my ink on thoughts

and I don’t whole sale how I know

I am writing hell when I want to be,

so sit down and let me introduce to you

the neo soul I bleed.

I have pressed snooze

over and over again and the quotes

of all my old school writing kinfolks

all have had a one on one with me,

and have reminded me of the elegance

of my one sound.

And all I can do is sit down

and let my tears pound the pavement

and say listen to the rock the mic tears

that roles a lullaby chorus

that has left me.

Hello Mr. Poet Telephone man,

you have dialed the thoughts

of my number and this time

I didn’t give you a click,

but answered you in response

of my proper ghetto with,

I am about to get back on my writing shit.

As my thoughts are grinding to you

as a reader you can best believe

I just been sleeping doing a

writing film play behind the scenes,

because its just to many imitators

trying to sing my soul song.

Hey now, who has a sassy class act like I do?

And who is the arrogant lady

of Enthralling that will take off her clothes?

I have a flow that is so cold it shivers up prose.

I ’am the gills of oxygen

and the tales of Elm that hasn’t went bleak.

So you as my ex writing mentor

sit down and take a seat,

while you help me remember,

what that stage high meant,

as I sit in thought pity just trying to

get back on my writing shit.

 

 

Child Hood School Writing Mentor Dedication:

Rico Salvador

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

Author notes

I’ am Fin To Get My Writing Shit Together

I have a new guidance I have been told
I have written myself into a colma.
Never thought that would happen but
yea that is what I have did. smh (shakin my head )
Would you believe even your thoughts need counceling?
a new one but i am in it muuuuuuuuuuuah!
defest lil bitch that is me

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    June 10, 2009
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    Love what you did here and I'm so glad to see you back writing again! I've been missing you


    And all I can do is sit down
    and let my tears pound the pavement
    and say listen to the rock the mic tears
    that roles a lullaby chorus
    that has left me

    I ’am the gills of oxygen
    and the tales of Elm that hasn’t went bleak.


  • Da-Lyricologist
    June 7, 2009

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    aww welcome back hun... I didnt even read this but i all ready know it was bomb....watchout for me on my space.... I am expanding in the music.. working with Talented artists and Producers ..... the list goes on keep writing sexy..... I got u


  • faderman1959
    June 6, 2009

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    The writing is in you and you have to let it out. I wrote a poem or two just about this sort of thing so know how you feel. Just keep writing my friend no matter what and it will begin to flow again! Its great to see you writing again! Keep it up!


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      June 8, 2009

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      faderman! omfg dude heeeeeeeeeey! ok i will so come catch up on you hugz tights ty and yes i will do just that


  • Ephiphany silver member
    June 6, 2009

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    It's all good babe ur Flame never dies


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 6, 2009

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    my man Weaver..

    said it right..you have the gift, and it shall never part..just let it happen..and this piece here is ABSOLUTE PROOF you haven't lost a step..loved this 'comeback' lady!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 6, 2009

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    I know you'll be pullin yourself out of that coma sweet soul. as the pen you weave takes your thoughts straight out of control. Spin and spit upon a mic, your words unfurl, you got what it takes, you go girl! Thanks for sharing the keypads of your heart, may you forever know, our love of weaving shall never part.

    Love Mushy King.


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      June 6, 2009
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      muuuuuuuuuuuah! awwz i appreciate it i havent forgot about to post my guilt now mushy then i be comming over shhhh naked and make you pass out kidding I love you

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