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My Train

There is a weighing darkness building up deeply inside
Past anguish, moving through a crowded a mind
Climbing in parallel with a street losing time
There are crying shadows deep and far behind

Cold darkness flowing through a train
The body overburdened screaming in pain
Is this the cure to a man dying of fear
Death is a carriage bursting with tears



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