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I Am No Longer the Young Rebel. Bummer…

or Young Rebels, Old Rebels



There was a day when the gleam
of electric kool-aid acid tests
sprouted from psychedelic eyes embedded
in the cool breeze of cosmic skulls
ripped with karma and mind alterations
bouncing down hills of marshmallow pies
in amplified metal skins welded together
with 120 decibels of feedback
screaming for wrongs to right,
pains to sooth, for a revolution that will not be televised...

We worshipped the bizarre, the unusual, the new,
always the new, for we were new

and they were old…


Guess what?
We are no longer the young rebels. We have been replaced.
Bummer.

The next generation has arrived,
their nihilistic banners alien and threatening our reign,
and it is we who are wondering what the hell they are talking about…

Perhaps we have been drawn into worlds past,
merely searching in a different direction,
perhaps seeking the universal, the eternal,
neglecting the present;

and so like a fluid that assumes the shape of its container
a new generation flows in
on virtual records
at virtual malls
in virtual worlds
filling the void we left at the turnstile…







and they came from their own darkness...
Growing up 90's (retrospect) by white stone

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  • condor gold member
    June 7

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    As the generation fly by, each has its own sounding board. The sixties and the seventies were very special times and all you described above were the norm of the youth of that day. Now, we stand with open eyes wondering what the hell are these kids doing with themselves. We don't understand, but then, our parents did not understand us and so the cycle goes. Brilliant write that had a great story involved. well done.

  • Hippies turned into yuppies, had some kids, taught them how to rebel even younger, now we're having kids, etc. etc. ad infinitum, ad nauseum. We are constantly going to replace and be replaced, eh? Good poem, bro.


    • wbiro gold member
      June 6
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      but in a proper historical perspective, the yuppie thing was mid-70's, so more correctly you'd say "hippies solidly entrenched as yuppies"...

  • Theasp
    June 6

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    Since I have Asperger tendencies, and I'm old

    I must tell you and OCDily compelled to tell you, you now know what it feels like the first time a woman goes from"babe" to "ma'am"


    • wbiro gold member
      June 6
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      yes, reminds me of a movie where the girls says, "Don't be a guy, be a man. The world has too many guys!"

  • you have such a way of expression.


    • wbiro gold member
      June 6
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      I'm going to frame that comment... yes I am...

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