I woke up
a little early today
to see the dark-dimmed sky
and thought perhaps
I had slept though the next day.
But what happened next
was beauty taking over....
my mind fraudulently convulsed
when the sun silently said hello.
It had peeked it's fiery forehead
over wretched treetops
and mesmerized me temporarily.
Golden dollops of magic
danced with periwinkle ringlets
and pink satin.
So beautiful,
so touching,
so breathtaking
that I was lost in thought.
Till the clouds were washed away
by the morning blue glory celestial sphere
and I said....."Wow.."...
A contest entry
- Prewrites by Dragonbabyx3.
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This is outstanding! The imagery you provoked, the words you used, it all fell together so perfectly, seamless. I really enjoyed reading this! Not often do I find a piece that needs absolutly no critique on, But I have now 
Beautiful write!!!
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wow, thank you...and i'm really happy you liked it. and that you didn't need to critique. thanks
~Wicked Lovely
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