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Finally Home

For so long I loved you
And for so long I've so desperatly awaited your return
Remenising on the days when we were together
And the happy times we shared
When I would cry I would run into your arms
And everything would be alright
You gave the sun a reason to shine
When hope was long thought to be lost
It was you who showed humanity a reason to live on
Within the gates of Heaven
Is where I know you are now
Looking down at the ones you left behind
Telling us not to worry
Because your finally home







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  • Mr.
    June 5

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    This was so beautiful! What an excellent poem. It's so uplifting! I'm giving you a million applause for this.

  • That was so powerful and truly touched my heart!!!!!