Everything was bright.
Everything fell dark.
Everything was filled with light.
Everything was in park.
Everything was falling away.
Everything was filled with emotion.
Everything turned gray.
Everything was left in desolation.
Everything forgotten and lost.
Everything in a burning Hell.
Everything covered in freezing frost.
Everything was far from well.
Everything has tried to escape.
Everything is willing to live.
Everything is trying to forget this desolate landscape.
Everything is driving to oblivion.
Everything ruined and gone.
Everything hurt and forsaken.
Everything slain and wrong.
Everything dead and overtaken.
Everything in ash.
Everything covered in rubble.
Everything gone by in a flash.
Everything was in trouble.
Everything could have been saved.
Everything was beginning to long.
Everything was caved.
Everything wouldn't been gone.
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Comments
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Um, yeah
I read this poem earlier, too dark for a 12 year old.
Too well written.

