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[ I remember, ]

I remember,
In December,
At that party,
In the gloom,

They were talking,
I was gawking
At your face
Across the room.

Then you vanished.
I was banished
To the present
Company.

I had thought you
Were my Pertheus
But you never
Rescued me.

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  • loves toy
    July 29
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    ver good

    thank you for you advise on my poem. i will take that into consideration when i revise it.


  • Sokarjo
    June 7

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    Ohh delightful! Excellent flow and rhyme. And content! I adore this; how well it reads, how it ends especially. Splendid piece, dear friend!


  • dame de la riviere
    June 6
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    An amusing poem. Nicely done! , Dannie

  • Purrsanthema
    June 6
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    Oh how I've been through parties like these! So beautifully stated! This is lovely!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 5

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    Ah..i liked the crescndo of the sentiments you brought through the lines and throuh the words of touching scenario..well thought poetry..thanks for sharing..

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