this is my life
this is my suicide
this is me slowly slipping
with no hand to hold
with no one to know
this is where it comes to the end
this is where I walk away
and go and cry
because this is my suicide
this is where I say
goodbye
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umm don't take seriously - for now -
just tell me what you think?
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Deep Poem.
Im here to talk too. just so you know. -
what does "for now" mean? and u always got me to talk to... this poem is an understandable feeling but it is very sad. i luvers u!
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for now as in I don't know if/when I'm gonna be suicidal. o.o but I've recovered from this it's been a while ago I wrote it
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i really like this poem becaus eevery body in my life is always trying to butt i
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wow this poem is very powerful !!
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um....ok
nothing is worth your life. As for your poem, I see a cry for help, darkness, loneliness, depresssion, just know, there is hope, & there are a few people who have felt that way
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for now?? if you ever need to talk, im here to listen. take a look at mine, they're pretty dark. lol. but.. i really liked this. it has a lot of feeling, and there is a lot of emotion. great job.
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