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No Longer

The light dies
From your horrible eyes
The sweet, tangy, metallic smell
Of blood spilt
And no one’s going to tell
Your heart beats slowing
Your life essence spilling
As the light dies
From your horrible eyes
No longer will you see
Every one of your ties
Broken, shattered, gone
No longer will you rise
With the morning sun
No longer will you hear
And no one
Will shed a tear
As the light dies
From your horrible eyes
No longer will you
Haunt my nightmares
No longer will you
Taunt me with those mocking eyes
As the light dies
From your horrible eyes
No longer will you take
What doesn’t belong to you
No longer will you fake
That sweet, charming smile
And you’ll no longer
Make me suffer
As the light dies
From your horribly beautiful eyes
That beautiful color
Of the deepest red
Staining my hands
And my smile is wicked
There’s a gleam in my eyes
I feel no sorrow
Nor regret
As the light dies
From those horrible eyes.

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  • OMG!! AWESOMENESS! this was a really good piece! I enjoyed it alot! very neat rhyme and depth to this! keep up the good work!! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!