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Maximum Overdrive

Almighty God, I ask you for help and guidance,
For my sadness had reached maximum overdrive.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 29

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    This is short but it shows how powerfull these words are. And it is good you call out to God fot help he is there for us at all times. Thank you for sharing, I hope things get better.


  • anaisnais
    July 10

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    When the heart is down it's good to know there are folk near or far that we can call upon to share in our hour of need. Welcoming heart and mind here opens for you with prayer my friend...Lift your head and see the light....Amen...


  • onesugar gold member
    July 7

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    I've been there bro, that is where AS I WALKED sprang from that I wrote. It is so hard to carry on day to day when emotions are that high and frought. Short but your feelings come through loud and clear.

    ~sugar~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 5

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    A cry for help, very heavy and deep this one. Short but your emotions really come through here. Very well done. I like the background too, it compliments your piece very well. Keep writing.

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon