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Girlfriend Checklist

Am I your whole story
Or just a name on your list?
Maybe just a notch on your bedpost,
Because I don't even deserve a name
But can you tell me,
If I'm more than just a line in a song

So why are you angry
With promises I make
While you're gone?
Because if you never left in the first place
A promise wouldn't have had to be made

Hold your words
Don't waist your breath
Because you wouldn't
Give them up for me anyhow,
Even though all my breaths could be yours

You have so much more flaunting to do
But don't be flaunting me,
You don't have my name
I'm just a black spot on your list

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Bah screw you

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  • good poem.

    but wats wrong? :[

  • dont be angry? are you fucking kidding me? how can i not be angry that youre willing to abandon us all? you know how bad off we are without you it much more worse than you are with him youre right we need to talk