Your words
Soundless but deafening
Paralyze me
My heart
Motionless and static
Silently echoes
Your memory
Frozen in time
Chills to the bone
Author notes
#46 Loss of Motion
A contest entry
- Title Prompts Contest by Rashida.
1400 points, ended June 6, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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This is brilliant, so few words but says so much.
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Fabulous work here, I love the movement in your writing.
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Wow this sounds almost tragic. Great take on the prompt choice, best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you. Without love, we are motionless. ~lonesome dove~
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