All inside this pent up rage
No way to escape
Reach out for my long lost friend
And reunite it with my vein
A kiss so intimate and close
The lips of metal cold
A trace left there among the scars
Of tales and stories told
I can imagine your voice
Here inside my head
Warning me of consequences
All the tears you’ve shed
Begging me on hands and kness
To lay down my precious friend
Your black eyes pleading helplessly
To just love you instead
Spread about for all to see
The pain drips from my veins
The look of horror upon your face
While me, I hold no shame
Finally a smile on my face
When all my blood has bled
The beauty of a metal kiss
Its lips of crimson red
A contest entry
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Absolutly everything about that was just SO beautiful!
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there is a three letter word for this and that would be wow
everything about this poem is just wow. the stucture the format... i can seee taste and feel what you are writing about i really love it -
This Is Amazing Write
So Beautiful!
Thankyou For Entering -
I related very much with this write. There is... someone, I feel this way about. Excellent writing. Good luck.
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wow this is so beautiful. you actually made me cry. thank you! this is exactly what i was looking for. thank you for entering this
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A fantastic write with some beatiful images!
''A kiss so intimate and close
The lips of metal cold
A trace left there among the scars
Of tales and stories told''
These lines just caught me - very poetic
good luck in the contest
take care
Suza
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wow powerful
i wish i hadn't been on suicide watch during this contest. i could have writen about Nicole. You did very well in your scheme, very ominous, very cold, very good
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Feelings exposed
A strange and terrible cry
Kneeling before the pain
Wonderful write -
O...M...G...
This poem is absolutely AMAZING!!! I loved it, the imagery here is so captivating its unreal. I read it like 3 times over. You have a unique talent. Keep writing and creating.
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good rite and thanx 4 entering
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