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The days you loved me

i felt i could walk a thousand miles
for the days you loved me.
i made my self believe  i could fly,
the days you loved me.
i lived every day with a smile on my face.
for the days that you loved me.
i prayed for you day and night.
cause i knew you loved me.


my thougts were filled with memories of you
of the days you loved me.
you were the dream i dreamed
for i believed you loved me.


I'm consumed by pain since the day you left me,
but ive learned that the people you love,
are the people who will break your heart,
but as i think back, one thing is for sure,
the temporary love you showed me  is worth this pain.

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  • fantome errant
    June 6, 2009

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    very relatable.

    It takes a while to be able to look back and decide it was worth it. Some people never do.

    Great work! Keep writing! ♫
    - Cass