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Still Going Strong

Do not weep over my dead body,
instead rejoice over my living soul.
I wish that I could dry your tears,
hug you, and try to make you whole.

While I may not be able to reach out and touch you
or laugh at the silly jokes you make,
I do not want your memories of me
to make your eyes tear up or your heart ache.

You and I both know very well
that I'm not all that far from you.
I am in your mind and in your heart
in all you think and all you do.

I am in the wind which brushes your face
and the sun that beats down to warm you skin;
I am part of the rain that washes your body
and inside the thoughts that make you grin.

Some say that life ends in death
but I can assure you that I am still going strong;
and I will cotinue to stand by your side
and be your twin your whole lifelong.

Author notes

This is supposed to be written from her point of view.
I really hope that this poem brings you some kind of peace.

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  • 62 for Write
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    Great Write.

    nicely penned, wish you luck
    anyway
    thanks for entering

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