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Lyrical

we are all here for a reason of a particular path;
you dont need a degree to know you are apart of the math;
people think im delerious;
but im so damn serious;
thats why i expose my soul to the world;
the globe;
trying to make it better for these little boys and girls;
im not just an individual;
my sprit is apart of this thats why i get spiritual;
but i get my hymns from him;
so its not me it's he who is lyrical;
im not a miracle;
im a heaven sent instament;
my hypnotic regiment navigates notes to your soul;
and your mental;
that's why i am instramental;
yea i make my loot by rent day;
but that aint gives me the heart of Kunta Kintai;
im trying to get us free like Sinkai;
i cant stop;
that's why im hot;
determination;
dedication;
motivation;
im talkin to you and my many inspiration when i say;
i cant let you or self down;
if i was on the highest cliff;
on the highest rift;
and you slipped off the side;
and clinched on to you life in my grip;
i would never ever let you down;
and when these words are found;
let it be known in God's penminship has be signed;
with a language called love;
that's why my breath is felt by the death;
and mark my words i heard and confined;
to the ears of the blind;
i too dream in color and in rhyme;
so i guess im one of a kind in a full house;
cuz every time i open my heart soul or my mouth;
a touch of God reigns out!

*T0XIIK*

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Written March 16th, 2004

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  • godzvayne
    July 31, 2005
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    I didn't like this, it seemed to much of a rap song, and I hate rap music. But still, its your cup of tea, and there is nothing wrong with that. Keep up what you are doing for future writes!


  • beck
    March 20, 2004
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    I like this one - wouldn't say so if I didn't!! First of yours I've read but won't be the last!

    Beck


  • March 20, 2004
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    FUCK HORUS... YOU DID GREAT


  • March 19, 2004
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    i really liked thid poem... it had great meaning, and dont liosten to that prik!


  • horus8 gold member
    March 18, 2004
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    I have to go take a shower now.

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